oh awsome!!! i love her eye! its so pretty!

i thought cassandra was blonde...

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You did an amazing job! I love the blinds effect

great work on the shadowing with the blind, someday i'll learn to shadow at all never mind doing that. Great stuff and Cassandra is sexy as always

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Woah, I love the lighting.

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Very sexy indeed. Nice job with the lighting through the blinds. My only gripe is that it looks like her right leg disappears from the knee down (Perhaps it's just a judgement issue on my part).

Anyhow, great job once again

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Sure does! That is a great effect. Well done.

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I really like the wistful nature of this. The way the eye doesn't perfectly align with the mouth, it gives it a light, unfocused feeling. The blinds effect was the perfect answer and very well executed. The top is fine, but the panties are pretty faulty imo. You're trying too hard here and not borrowing enough from the design of the top.

If you look at the wide strap around the back of the top, this would suggest the most logical match, design wise, would be shorts. IMO, this image would look much more balanced if she were wearing shorts of about the same sort of dimensions of cycling shorts / supatsu.

At the edge of the image, you've kind of gotten lazy, everything is progressively more refined as you travel right to left, but the legs are just whipped off in a quick stroke and not properly finished. Now, if you take her right leg, you would expect her knee nearest the left most side of the image, and either her leg kicking back (with foot in the air, given the current angle, or behind her, if you were to correct the angle of her right leg). The legs just kind of dissapear into nowhere otherwise, and I would say that this kind of detracts from the nice flow you've achieved in the image, with a curvy X (her body, crossing the tail).

Her sitting position is also slightly awkward. This would probably stem from hiding her hand off the bottom of the image, and not showing anything of her right arm. She seems propped up by an invisible rig, more than a natural position. Maybe what I would expect is her left arm at a right angle, so that her hand would rest just aside her panties; and then her other arm, either resting on her thigh; or held out behind her (over the back of her tail) with her palm propping her up.

The bottom half of the backgronud is a little rigid, and needs to seem more softer. Firstly, there should be more shadow in the background area below her tummy, and a general 'spotlight' effect over the entire lower half, so that left-uper and right-upper corners of the 'bed' are slightly darker - a bit like what is achieved with the exclusion of the upper-right corner of the 'bed' with the blind light.

Overall: I like the gentle and wistful nature of the image, the colour selection and the light contrast over her body and hair.

Areas for improvement: Try not tail out at the edges of your pictures; extending the characters limbs for infinity. If you're drawing this on paper first, that can be understood, as you have physical limits and it can be difficult to draw the edge, when you have nothing to match up against outside the paper. If you're doing the linework digitally, try creating your canvas with a inch or two extra space around the edges, so that you can finish of the full design of limbs that clip the edges of your intended canvas size, and thus achieve a much more pristine look when it comes to the final colouring.

Your logo is too big and overblown IMO

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looks very beautiful

looks very beautiful